【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有十處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限1詞

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Gardening is an activity where you have to get your hands dirtily. I try my luck with a spade several times, added a few more plant variety to my garden each year. I know how to do this because of my grandfather, that loved gardening and took the great pride in those peas and carrots grown in his backyard. The entire backyard was devoted his plants. I now had a house and a garden of his own. Last summer my tomato plants gave us a dozen grape-sized tomatoes I often think back to my grandfather garden. He passed away years ago, but I have ever forgotten to allow the new roots to grow in my garden.

【答案】1.dirtily→dirty

2.added→adding

3.variety→varieties

4.that→who

5.去掉the或?qū)?/span>the→a

6.在devoted和his之間加to

7.had→have

8.his→my

9.grandfather→grandfather’s

10.ever→never

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者在爺爺?shù)挠绊懴聼釔凵狭藞@藝，即使在爺爺過世之后也仍然不忘在自己的花園種植植物。

1. 考查形容詞作賓語補(bǔ)足語。句意：園藝是一項(xiàng)會(huì)讓你不得不把手弄臟的活動(dòng)。根據(jù)句意可知，dirtily在句子中充當(dāng)hands的補(bǔ)足語，補(bǔ)充說明手是臟的，考查的是形容詞作賓語補(bǔ)足語。故將dirtily改為dirty。

2. 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。分析句子成分可知，句中已有謂語動(dòng)詞try，沒有連詞，可知這是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，所以可推斷add充當(dāng)非謂語動(dòng)詞；add與邏輯主語I之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，表示主動(dòng)要用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。故將added改為adding。

3. 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。variety意為“種類”，是可數(shù)名詞；根據(jù)前面修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)的a few可知，variety應(yīng)該用作復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將variety改為varieties。

4. 考查非限制性定語從句的關(guān)系代詞。句意：我知道如何種植是因?yàn)槲业臓敔�，他熱愛園藝并非常自豪于自己在后院種植的豌豆和胡蘿卜。根據(jù)句意可知，“that loved gardening and took the great pride in those peas and carrots grown in his backyard”是對(duì)grandfather的補(bǔ)充說明，所以這是非限制性定語從句；先行詞grandfather指人，在從句中充當(dāng)主語；在非限制性定語從句中，充當(dāng)主語指人只能用關(guān)系代詞who。故將that改為who。

5. 考查固定搭配中的冠詞。句意：我知道如何種植是因?yàn)槲业臓敔�，他熱愛園藝并非常自豪于自己在后院種植的豌豆和胡蘿卜。根據(jù)句意可知，此處考查了固定搭配take a great pride in或take great pride in。故the多余，應(yīng)去掉或?qū)?/span>the改為a。

6. 考查固定搭配中的介詞。句意：整個(gè)后院都貢獻(xiàn)給了他的植物。根據(jù)句意可知，此處考查固定搭配be devoted to，意為“獻(xiàn)身于，專注于”。故要在devoted和his之間加to。

7. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語now可知，句子描述的是現(xiàn)在的情況，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；謂語動(dòng)詞要用原形或三單；句子主語為第一人稱I，謂語動(dòng)詞用原形。故將had改為have。

8. 考查人稱代詞。句意：我現(xiàn)在有了一套自己的房子和花園。根據(jù)句意可知，房子和花園是屬于“我自己的”，要用of my own來表示。故將his改為my。

9. 考查名詞所有格。句意：我經(jīng)常想起爺爺?shù)幕▓@。根據(jù)句意可知，花園是屬于爺爺?shù)�，表示所屬關(guān)系要用名詞所有格。故將grandfather改為grandfather’s。

10. 考查副詞及邏輯關(guān)系。句意：雖然爺爺過世好幾年了，但是我從來沒有忘記在花園里種植新的植物。根據(jù)句子中的轉(zhuǎn)折詞but可推斷，盡管爺爺已經(jīng)去世，但是作者從沒有忘記爺爺教會(huì)自己的園藝，句子中要表達(dá)否定含義。故將ever改為never。

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