Question

隨著我們長(zhǎng)大，和家人圍坐在一起吃飯的時(shí)間越來(lái)越少。然而有研究表明，跟家人一起吃飯有助于身體健康。對(duì)此你有何看法？你又是如何做的？請(qǐng)以Eating with parents makes you healthier為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，陳述你的理由。
Eating with parents makes you healthier
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          

Answer 1

Eating with parents makes you healthier
I believe eating with parents will make teenagers healthier.
First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy. Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life. The dinner time is just a chance for communication.
Also, home-made meals are healthier for us to eat, for the food problem seems more and more serious now.
As for me, I have dinner with my parents every day. My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us.

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文提到一些起常用短語(yǔ)As for關(guān)于； make teenagers healthier 使人們更健康。First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy這句話中as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指后面這件事。Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life.這句話中動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，a way of doing做某事的一種方式。My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us.這句話中體現(xiàn)形容詞最高級(jí)。