Question

請認(rèn)真閱讀下面這篇文章，根據(jù)要求寫一篇短文。
In most schools, students in one class have the same schedule (時(shí)間表). But at Beijing National Day School, each of the 4,174 students can build their own class timetable.
The school has used this alternative (可供選擇的) education system since 2011. Students choose courses of different difficulty levels and categories (類別) based on their interests and abilities. They don’t have fixed classrooms or regular (固定的) classmates. Instead, they have more than 400 courses and 272 school clubs to choose from. The school hopes students can become masters of their own study and find their potential (潛能).
Students also like the system. Tian Yatong, 14, said she learns to be responsible (負(fù)責(zé)任的) for herself through the system.
She has chosen level 2 (the medium level) for math based on her current (當(dāng)前的) abilities even though she has passed the level 3 tests.
“I like the teacher of level 2. I think it works best for me,” said Tian.
The system also “opens a new world” for students, said 13-year-old Li Zixuan.
Li was amazed to find that she could learn cooking, sewing , making films and many other interesting things at the school.
“You’re sure to find one that interests you,” Li said.
Li has chosen a cooking course this term. Now she can make different cakes at home for her parents.
“I may become a pastry (糕點(diǎn)) cook one day. Who knows?” Li said.
要求：
根據(jù)上文簡述這種新的教育系統(tǒng)的兩點(diǎn)優(yōu)勢
你如何看待這種新的教育系統(tǒng)
如果你有機(jī)會(huì)在這樣的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，你想選擇什么課程和什么樣的俱樂部，并說出原因。
注意：
短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫。
詞數(shù)90詞左右。
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Answer 1

One possible vision:
This is a new way of learning. I like it. First, students can choose what to learn, when to learn and who to learn from by themselves. They can learn the subject they are interested in. Interest is important in learning. Second, students don't have fixed classroom or regular classmates. This give students a chance to meet someone that has the same interest. And they can make more friends. It's good for students' growing.
I think this new teaching system is vary good. Students can learn according their own interests and abilities. This can make students better and better. But I think some basic subjects should be learned by everybody, not just be chosen, such as Chinese, math and English.
If I have a chance to study in this school. I will choose cooking and sewing courses. Because I can't cook and sew now. And I need these skills. What's more, I like cooking very much. I hope I can cook for my parents.

試題分析：本作文題目是對閱讀和寫作的雙重考查，在讀懂所給文章的前提下，對所提供的材料進(jìn)行評價(jià)和闡述觀點(diǎn)。所給文章內(nèi)容是一種新的自選式的教育方式。題干有三個(gè)要求，一個(gè)是優(yōu)勢，一個(gè)是如何看待還有一個(gè)是選擇課程并說明原因。作文要包含所要求的三點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，同時(shí)，要語意連貫，不可以三點(diǎn)內(nèi)容互相脫離。多運(yùn)用所學(xué)短語句式明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】例文完整地表達(dá)了題干所要求的三方面內(nèi)容。段落之間比較連貫。每一方面的內(nèi)容闡釋也很有層次感，表達(dá)明確。例文從自由選擇科目和更有利于交朋友兩個(gè)方面來表達(dá)新式教育的優(yōu)勢。同時(shí)，從正反兩面來評價(jià)這種教育方式，好處在于可以按興趣學(xué)習(xí)，缺點(diǎn)在于沒有對基礎(chǔ)學(xué)科的整體要求。最后，例文作者選擇了烹飪和縫紉，原因是作者喜歡和生活需要。