6.假定英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫上該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the Internet three days ago.The gift whose the price is not high is a beautiful pink cup decorating with my sister's name,her date of birth,and some best wishes to her as well.It's such lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I liked it by first sight.
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He enjoy shopping online very much.There is no doubt that more and more people preferred to shop online nowadays.We don't need spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good number of different choice on the Internet.