Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

英語課上，老師要求同桌相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進(jìn)行修改。共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出改加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Li Hui, my friend in high school, has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed, her parents don’t agree with her decision at first. Therefore, Li Hui would not change her mind. She worked hardly to perfect her skills. Just before he finished high school, the chance came: the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition. The first three winner would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance. She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel it certain that her dream will come true.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】dreamed后加of或about

【2】disappointed → disappointment

【3】don’t → didn’t

【4】Therefore → However

【5】hardly → hard

【6】he → she

【7】the → a

【8】winner → winners

【9】missing → miss

【10】去掉it

【解析】

試題分析：文章講述了高中同學(xué)李慧為了夢想努力學(xué)習(xí)畫畫，最終實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想的故事。

【1】dreamed后加of或about.考查固定短語。此處指他夢想成為一名卡通大師。dream of/about夢想……，故dreamed后加of或about。

【2】disappointed → disappointment.考查名詞。“令某人失望的是”是to one’s disappointment，故把disappointed改為disappointment。

【3】don’t → didn’t.考查時(shí)態(tài)。故事是高中時(shí)發(fā)生的事，要用過去時(shí)，故把don’t 改為didn’t。

【4】Therefore → However.考查連詞。句意：她的父母起初不同意她的決定，然而她沒有改變主意。此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折不是因果，故把Therefore改為However。

【5】hardly → hard.考查副詞。hardly幾乎不；hard努力地。此處指她努力工作完善技能。故把hardly改為hard。

【6】he → she.考查代詞。上文提到李慧，代詞用的是she，這里還是指她，故把he 改為she。

【7】the → a.考查冠詞。此處指一次機(jī)會來了，表示一次，故把the改為a。

【8】winner → winners.考查名詞。此處指前三名獲勝者，所以名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把winner改為winners。

【9】missing → miss.考查動詞形式。tell sb. not to do sth.告訴某人不要做某事，to后用動詞原形，故把missing改為miss。

【10】去掉it.考查代詞。此處指我確信，feel是系動詞，certain是表語，不用it。故去掉it。