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【題目】隨著中國(guó)人生活水平的提高，選擇到國(guó)外去旅行已成為中國(guó)人盛行的度假方式之一。但是，有些中國(guó)旅行者的不文明行為卻給廣大的中國(guó)人丟盡了臉，如亂丟垃圾、在景區(qū)亂寫亂畫、在公共場(chǎng)所大聲喧嘩、大聲接打手機(jī)、在飛機(jī)上大打出手等等。請(qǐng)以“Be a Civilized Chinese”為題目，寫一篇英語稿件，投給China Daily.

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Be a Civilized Chinese

With the improvement of Chinese people’s living standard, ________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Be a Civilized Chinese

With the improvement of Chinese people’s living standard, more and more people choose to travel abroad as a way of spending their holidays.

However, some tourists have uncivilized behavior when they are traveling abroad, which greatly makes all of us Chinese ashamed. For example, when they visit some world famous places of interest, they litter here and there. What’s worse, some even carve their names on the trees or statues. Besides, some tourists talk loudly in public places with each other or on their mobile-phones. Worst of all, some passengers on board even fight against each other or with the air-hostesses just because of some inconvenience. These actions show the low quality of some tourists.

As far as I am concerned, it’s the duty of every Chinese to protect the environment and public facilities, no matter where we are traveling. Only in this way can we be civilized Chinese who will win respect from all over the world.

【解析】

試題分析：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如，用了很多關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，邏輯明確，如However, For example, Besides, Worst of all, As far as I am concerned,使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫；With the improvement of Chinese people’s living standard, more and more people choose to travel abroad as a way of spending their holidays.用with引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，突出句子重點(diǎn)，句子結(jié)構(gòu)平衡；Only in this way can we be civilized Chinese who will win respect from all over the world.倒裝句結(jié)構(gòu)，變換句子樣式，使文章更吸引人。