Question

假如你是王飛，今天你收到了好友李磊的一封信。信中說他想買一部手機(jī)，為此他想征求一下你的意見。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給李磊寫一封回信，建議他不要買手機(jī)。
1．校內(nèi)不允許使用手機(jī)，因?yàn)闀�打擾別人；  2．發(fā)短信會占據(jù)太多的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間；
3．經(jīng)常會收到一些不良短信；              4．手機(jī)費(fèi)用會增加父母的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)。
注意：1．回信須包括以上全部要點(diǎn)，但不得逐句翻譯；2．要符合書信的格式要求；
3．詞數(shù)：100左右。
參考詞匯：短信 the short message；打擾disturb
                                                                                          
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           

Answer 1

Dear Li Lei：
I’m very glad to receive your letter today. How are you getting along with your study?
In your letter，you asked me whether you should buy a cell phone or not. In my opinion，it is unnecessary for a student. Why？First，sending or receiving short messages takes up too much time. Therefore，the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter. Second，it is forbidden to use cell phones at school because sometimes you have to answer the call in class. As a result，your behavior may disturb others. Third，you may be disturbed by some unhealthy short messages. Finally，as a student，you have to ask your parents for the phone expenses，and they will have to spend more in supporting you than before.
In short，I suggest that you think it twice. Best wishes.
Yours sincerely，
Wang Fei

試題分析：本題要求考生根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示要英語寫一篇100詞左右的作文。首先，這是“你”給李磊的回信，故要使用第一人稱，同時(shí)注意書信格式。其次，回信勸告李磊不買手機(jī)及其理由，所以使用動詞的一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第三，題目提示較為具體，考生完成任務(wù)難度不大。但是不可逐句翻譯。不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
本文使用了比較高級的詞匯、結(jié)構(gòu)和較為復(fù)雜的句式。如“動名詞”作主語、定語從句、think twice等。句式多樣，有簡單句、并列句，有復(fù)合句。條例清楚，層次分明。