Question

1．假設(shè)你是李華，是某國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席．針對(duì)不少同學(xué)愛(ài)吃快餐（fast food）及經(jīng)常不吃早飯的情況，請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)生會(huì)寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)，呼吁同學(xué)們培養(yǎng)健康的飲食習(xí)慣．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear friends，
Some students in our school prefer eating fast food and others often skip breakfast，which is bad for our health．
Fast food is considered to be junk food because they don't provide enough of the nutrients we need in a day．The negative effects of skipping breakfast can also be serious．Experts say breakfast is the most important meal of the day，without which our body cannot function properly．
Let's develop a healthy lifestyle from now on．Remember：eat meals on time，have a balanced diet and take exercise regularly．
We are what we eat．Let's take good care of ourselves in order to keep fit．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇倡議書(shū)．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明話(huà)題；二分析吃快餐的危害；三呼吁同學(xué)們培養(yǎng)健康的飲食習(xí)慣．
高分句型：
1．Some students in our school prefer eating fast food and others often skip breakfast，which is bad for our health．句子里謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞prefer表示"更喜歡"；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句； is bad for 表示"對(duì)…有害"．
我們學(xué)校的一些學(xué)生喜歡吃快餐，還有其他一些人不吃早餐，這些都對(duì)我們的健康有害．
2．Experts say breakfast is the most important meal of the day，without which our body cannot function properly句子里Experts say 是主句，后面的賓語(yǔ)從句省略了引導(dǎo)詞that；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指breakfast； function properly表示"運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)正常"．
專(zhuān)家們說(shuō)，早餐是一天里最重要的一頓飯，如果不吃，我們的身體不能運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)正常．

解答 Dear friends，
      Some students in our school prefer eating fast food and others often skip breakfast，which is bad for our health．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明話(huà)題）
      Fast food is considered to be junk food because they don't provide enough of the nutrients we need in a day．The negative effects of skipping breakfast can also be serious．Experts say breakfast is the most important meal of the day，without which our body cannot function properly．【高分句型二】（分析吃快餐的危害）
     Let's develop a healthy lifestyle from now on．Remember：eat meals on time，have a balanced diet and take exercise regularly．We are what we eat．Let's take good care of ourselves in order to keep fit．（呼吁同學(xué)們培養(yǎng)健康的飲食習(xí)慣）
                                                       Students'Union

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