Question

【題目】寫作
你們班開展了一次以"LessStress（壓力）, Better Life"為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準備發(fā)言稿,談談你的一些緩解壓力的好辦法,與同學分享,內(nèi)容包括:
●同學們中普遍存在的壓力：學習很努力，成績不理想；作業(yè)太多，沒時間休息.
●我的壓力：成績好，但與同學相處有困難；與父母缺乏溝通(communicatewith…)。
●緩解壓力的方法：至少兩項。

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
Less Stress,Better Life
Stress is aserious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too muchstress. Some students study very hard but they are still poor in their studies.They often worry about their exams. Others think that they have so muchhomework to do that they have no time to relax themselves.
I’m alwaysunder stress, too. I’m good at every subject, but it is hard for me to get onwell with my classmates, I can hardly communicate with my parents, either. Ireally feel tired sometimes. But how to solve the problem? I think aconversation with parents or teachers is helpful and taking exercise can makeus relaxed when we’re under pressure.
【解析】這篇作文為一篇以"LessStress（壓力）, Better Life"為主題的英語演講稿，談談自己的一些緩解壓力的好辦法，與同學分享。寫作要點要求：1同學們中普遍存在的壓力：學習很努力，成績不理想；作業(yè)太多，沒時間休息。2我的壓力：成績好，但與同學相處有困難；與父母缺乏溝通(communicatewith…)。3緩解壓力的方法：至少兩項。寫作亮點：本篇要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，條理清楚。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，句子簡潔明了，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：賓語從句that they haveso much homework to do that they have no time to relax themselves.狀語從句when we’reunder pressure.和 so……that句型， get on wellwith，communicate with等詞匯。