Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友 Jim 在做關(guān)于“中學(xué)生做家務(wù)”的調(diào)查，想了解你做家務(wù)的情況。請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1）你平時做哪些家務(wù)；

2）你對中學(xué)生做家務(wù)的看法。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)不少于 50；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.

Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time. I will clean up after dinner. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family. So far, my spaghetti has been the most delicious dish.

I think high school students should do some housework. For one thing, by doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society. For another, I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding; we chat with each other and sometimes even sing together. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.

Good luck with your survey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，回復(fù)Jim關(guān)于你做家務(wù)的情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文；

人稱：第一、二人稱為主；

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時；

要點：

1）你平時做哪些家務(wù)；

2）你對中學(xué)生做家務(wù)的看法。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

at home；manage to do；from time to time；clean up；a survey of；so far；do some housework；in the longer term；take responsibility；chat with；school work等

第三步：連詞成句

1. Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.

2. Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.

3. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting.

4. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family.

5. I think high school students should do some housework.

6. By doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society.

7. I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding.

8. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：Although；For one thing…For another…；

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：still；also；and；even；

3.表示時間關(guān)系：Every once等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改