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【題目】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

A friend of mine named Paul received an automobile from his brother as a Christmas present.

On Christmas Eve when Paul came out of his office, a little boy was walking around the shiny new car, admiring it. "Is this your car, Mister?" he asked.

Paul nodded. "My brother gave it to me for Christmas." "The boy was astounded. "You mean your brother gave it to you and it didn't cost you anything? Boy, I wish..." He hesitated.

Of course Paul knew what he was going to wish for. He was going to wish he had a brother like that. But what the lad said jarred Paul all the way down to his heels.

"I wish," the boy went on, "that I could be a brother like that” Paul looked at the boy in astonishment, then impulsively he added, "Would you like to take a ride in my automobile?"

"Oh yes, I'd love that."

After a short ride, the boy turned and with his eyes aglow, said, "Mister, would you mind driving in front of my house?"

Paul smiled a little. He thought he knew what the lad wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big automobile. But Paul was wrong again. "Will you stop where those two steps are?" the boy asked.

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He ran up the steps.

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Paul got out and lifted the lad to the front seat of his car.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

He ran up the steps. Then in a little while Paul heard him coming back, but he was coming fast. He was carrying his little crippled brother. He sat him down on the bottom step, then pointing to the car. 'There she is. Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn't cost him a cent. And some day I'm going to give you one just like it then you can see for yourself all the pretty things in the Christmas windows that I've been trying to tell you about.

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Paul got out and lifted the lad to the front seat of his car. The shining eyed older brother climbed in beside him. The older brother gently fastened the safety belt for his brother and politely asked, 'Mister, would you mind continuing driving around?" Deeply touched, Paul happily drove the car on the road again. That Christmas Eve, the three of them began a memorable holiday ride. That Christmas Eve was the happiest time that Paul had ever spent, because he learned what Jesus meant when he had said: "It is more blessed to give..."

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。文章主要講述了，一個男孩看到保羅哥哥送給他的圣誕禮物——一輛新車，這個男孩希望自己也可以像保羅的哥哥那樣，給自己的弟弟送圣誕節(jié)禮物。

續(xù)寫分為兩段，第一段的開頭是：他跑上臺階。所以可以接著寫：他走上臺階，過了一會又跑回來，然后對著他的弟弟說：“瞧，這就是我給你說的那輛車。他哥哥送給他的圣誕節(jié)禮物，他一分錢都沒花。以后我也像他的哥哥一樣，把你想要的、最好的東西送給你�！钡诙�段的開頭是：保羅下車，把小男孩抱到前坐上。所以可以接著寫：保羅說：“今天我是你們的大哥哥，我載著你們?nèi)ス湟蝗��！?/span> 哥哥聽了，很感動。保羅開心地圍著小區(qū)轉(zhuǎn)了幾圈，兄弟倆也很開心。他們?nèi)齻�度過了一個快樂難忘的圣誕節(jié)前夜。保羅也明白了：當(dāng)快樂被分成幾份時，更快樂。

續(xù)寫時應(yīng)注意時態(tài)，直接引語和間接引語的運(yùn)用。