Question

假設你是學校的學生會主席，你校計劃下周舉行為撫順洪水災區(qū)人民獻愛心捐助活動，請你代表學生會向同學們發(fā)出倡議，要點如下：
1. 受災嚴重，急需食品、衣物和藥品等； 2. 號召學生捐款捐物， 會盡快送往災區(qū)； 3. 你的看法。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

Answer 1

Teachers and fellow students,
As we all know , a terrible flood broke out in Fushun, Liaoning Province .People have suffered great losses in their lives and properties since then.
It’s reported that many houses were destroyed as a consequence of the flood ,and local people , who are badly in need of food , clothes and medicine , are living a hard life now .Here Students’ Union calls on everyone to give away your old clothes and pocket money generously .All the clothes and the money to be collected will be sent to the flood –stricken areas as soon as possible.
My fellow friends , “blood is thicker than water”.The flood made all our hearts links together .please hold out your hands and donate your love without hesitation.We believe miracles can be created and a great many lives will be saved .
That’s all .Thank you.

試題分析：本篇書面表達是一份倡議書。倡議書在結構安排上要首先講明發(fā)生的事件，事件的進展和當前的現(xiàn)狀。然后就此發(fā)出倡議，提出要求。其次在語言方面要真誠感人，要適當使用祈使句來增強號召力。而在時態(tài)方面則要根據(jù)需要選擇一般過去時、現(xiàn)在進行時、一般現(xiàn)在時或者將來時態(tài)。比如敘述事件部分就要使用一般過去時。
【亮點說明】本篇范文結構安排合理，是一篇很具有號召力的倡議書。作者使用的祈使句.please hold out your hands and donate your love without hesitation、諺語blood is thicker than water 和被動句We believe miracles can be created and a great many lives will be saved .很好地激發(fā)了人們的情感，引起人內心的共鳴，增強了人們戰(zhàn)勝困難的決心。此外句式的多變，長短句的結合，也是本文的一大亮點。