Question

請(qǐng)結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫(xiě)作。
No pains, no gains. With every effort made, a person always harvests what he has planted.
要求：
（1）就此材料發(fā)表你的感想；
（2）應(yīng)緊扣材料，結(jié)合實(shí)際，有明確的觀點(diǎn)；
（3）詞數(shù)不少于60。
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Answer 1

One possible version:
No gains can be achieved in the absence of pains, as is dramatically illustrated in the material above. Every effort we make will pay off some day, allowing us to reap the harvest expected.
It is especially true in our study. Once I failed in the mid-term exam, for the reason that I had been addicted to computer games and had never spared any time to make necessary preparations. After that, I adopted the resolution that I would tear myself away from games and concentrate on what I was supposed to do. I succeeded in the final exam, ranking 3 in the class. Why I could return to the top list best explains the undying truth of no pains, no gains.

試題分析：本文從分析No pains, no gains.這句話入手發(fā)表感想。要求緊扣材料，結(jié)合實(shí)際，有明確的觀點(diǎn)。還要注意字?jǐn)?shù)的要求：不少于60詞。議論文一般采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以自己身邊實(shí)際的事為例，往往用過(guò)去時(shí)。注意人稱(chēng)的一致性。再注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如pay off，throw away，be addicted to, concentrate on，還運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)形式做狀語(yǔ);主語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Once，After that等。