Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)同學(xué)Emily來(lái)信讓你建議在中國(guó)云南旅游的一些必到之處。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Emily寫封建議信，要點(diǎn)包括：
1.可到麗江小鎮(zhèn)。這里海拔約2500米，在這里體驗(yàn)納西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的戶外酒吧(bar)。
2.再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）這里每年都吸引數(shù)以百萬(wàn)計(jì)的游客。
3.再到昆明游覽云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接觸多種不同的少數(shù)民族文化（minority cultures）。
要求：1.必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充 2.詞數(shù)120左右
Dear Emily，
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Emily，
Glad to hear from you. You have asked me for my advice on travelling in Yunnan. It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.
To begin with, I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters. Not only can you experience Naxi culture but also you can see different styles of outdoor bars.  Besides, it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. It is filled with world-class sights and sceneries, which draws millions of tourists every year. Moreover, having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice. You can get in touch with a variety of minority cultures of China.
I hope you will have a good time travelling. I am looking forward to hearing from you and can hardly wait to share your joy of the trip.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。讓學(xué)生寫書信是高考中，常見(jiàn)的題材形式。學(xué)生感到很熟悉。成文時(shí)應(yīng)該注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.書信內(nèi)容要齊全。（1）可到麗江小鎮(zhèn)。這里海拔約2500米，在這里體驗(yàn)納西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的戶外酒吧(bar)。（2）再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）這里每年都吸引數(shù)以百萬(wàn)計(jì)的游客。（3）再到昆明游覽云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接觸多種不同的少數(shù)民族文化（minority cultures）。2.人稱：第一人稱；3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了從句：I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters.  it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. 高級(jí)句型：not only。。。but also。。。 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)：having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice.   It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions. 短語(yǔ)：looking forward to；have a good time；get in touch with；pay a visit to；hear from；插入語(yǔ)及連詞的使用：To begin with, Besides, Moreover。