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Su Daoquan, aged 65, was a retired man in Hechuan of Chongqing. He got a lot of attention to local people earlier this month during the first public appearance of his specially invention — a water boat. The opening performance of his pedal boat given on the nearby Fujiang River in front of a crowd of more than 100 onlookers. The pedal boat is 2.6 meters long and 1.4 meters wider. It has empty metal containers on both sides. The pedals are used to turn to a pedal wheel. The driver can ride it in the center or there is room for two other adult. He said that invented it brought him a lot of joy and that our creation is not harming the environment and is suitable for tourism.

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本文為記敘文。現(xiàn)年65歲的蘇道泉是重慶合川的一名退休男子。他的發(fā)明——水船首次公開露面時(shí)，受到了當(dāng)?shù)厝说臉O大關(guān)注。在附近的富江前100多名圍觀群眾面前他進(jìn)行了踏板船表演。踏動(dòng)跳板轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)輪子的人可以坐在中間，能容兩個(gè)成年人。發(fā)明它給他帶來了很多快樂，他的創(chuàng)作不損害環(huán)境，適合旅游。

1.考查系動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。分析句子可知，本人尚在，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故把was改為is。

2.考查固定搭配。句意：他的發(fā)明在本月初首次公開露面時(shí)受到了當(dāng)?shù)厝说臉O大關(guān)注。get attention from…意為“得到….的關(guān)注”，分析句子可知，一出現(xiàn)就得到關(guān)注，故把to改為from 。

3.考查形容詞辨析。分析句子可知，本句中的specially在句中修飾名詞invention，修飾名詞應(yīng)當(dāng)幫形容詞，所以把specially改為special。

4.考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)。句意：在附近的富江，在100多名圍觀群眾面前他公開表演踏板船。分析句子The opening performance of his pedal boat given on the nearby Fujiang River可知，本句的主語是The opening performance of his pedal boat謂語動(dòng)詞是given，二者是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以要用被動(dòng)語態(tài)。因此在given前添加was.

5.考查形容詞原級(jí)。句意：踏板船長2.6米，寬1.4米。分析語境可知，本句是固定用法，不能用比較級(jí)，故把wider改為wide 。

6.考查語境。句意：。turn to …（使）轉(zhuǎn)向，變成，求助于，翻書到，而本句turn的意思是 “使轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)”。根據(jù)語境可知“踏板用來轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)輪子的”，故去掉turn to中的to去掉。

7.考查連詞。句意：轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)輪子的人可以坐在中間，空間能容兩個(gè)成年人。分析語境可知，本句是并列關(guān)系，而非“或者”，故把 or改為and 。

8考查名詞的數(shù)。根據(jù)語境是兩個(gè)成年人，所以是復(fù)數(shù)，因此把adult改為adults。

9.考查動(dòng)詞的ing形式作主語。句意：他說，發(fā)明這種東西給他帶來了很多快樂。分析句子可知，本句的主語是invent it，所以要用動(dòng)詞的ing形式做主語，而過去分詞不能作主語，要用動(dòng)詞的ing形式作主語。故把invented改為inventing。

10.考查人稱代詞的一致性。句意：他說，發(fā)明它給他帶來了很多快樂，他的創(chuàng)作不損害環(huán)境，適合旅游。根據(jù)語境可知，本句是說他的(his)發(fā)明而不是我們的（our），所以要把our改為his。

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