【題目】假設你是李華。英語口語課上，老師要求大家各自描述一下自己想象中的大學生活。請結(jié)合以下同學的觀點，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文談談你對大學生活的認識。

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【答案】College life will be one of the most important stages in my life. I think my life in college will be more colorful and interesting than it is now. I can have free time to take part in some interesting clubs and activities, such as sports and theatre activities. Of course, there are maths clubs and science clubs as well. I may have many classmates from all over the country. I will have new friendships with them. Surely, managing my major subjects will be my main goal in my college life. Meanwhile, I want to take some online classes to increase my knowledge and broaden my horizons.

I will plan my college life based on what I hope to do after graduation. I believe that my college life will be interesting and meaningful.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于話題類作文。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，文章要求假設你是李華。英語口語課上，老師要求大家各自描述一下自己想象中的大學生活。請結(jié)合以下同學的觀點，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文談談你對大學生活的認識。時態(tài)應為一般將來時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：stage階段，colorful多彩的，take part in參加，such as例如，as well也，friendship友誼，main goal主要的目標，Meanwhile同時，online classes網(wǎng)上課程，broaden one’s horizons拓寬某人的視野，based on以…為基礎。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

亮點說明：作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如：I think my life in college will be more colorful and interesting than it is now.賓語從句的運用；I believe that my college life will be interesting and meaningful. 賓語從句的運用。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

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