Question

【題目】你發(fā)現(xiàn)周圍很多同學在用手機發(fā)短信，玩游戲等，影響了正常學習，請針對這個現(xiàn)象，寫一份廣播稿，呼吁同學放下手機，多關注身邊的人和事。內容包括：

1、簡述頻繁使用手機的危害性；

2、提出至少三項合理化的建議(多鍛煉……)。

注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右

2、開頭及結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear fellow students,

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That’s all. Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear fellow students,

Recently I have found many of us students spend too much time sending short messages or playing games on cell phones, which has negative effects on our studies and also does harm to our eyes. Worse still, we have little time to communicate with our parents and friends. Nor do we have time for physical exercise.

What shall we do to improve the situation? All of us should be fully aware of the harmful effects of frequent use of cell phones. To begin with, let's limit our time of playing with cell phones and start other hobbies. What's more, we should spend more time playing sports, which is beneficial to us. Besides, communicating with our friends is also a good choice to help us relax and get rid of the addiction. I hope that my suggestions will be of help to you.

Let’s put down our cell phones and focus on what is happening around us !

Let's take action now!

That’s all. Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一篇廣播稿。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一廣播稿：你發(fā)現(xiàn)周圍很多同學在用手機發(fā)短信，玩游戲等，影響了正常學習，請針對這個現(xiàn)象，寫一份廣播稿，呼吁同學放下手機，多關注身邊的人和事。內容包括：簡述頻繁使用手機的危害性；提出至少三項合理化的建議(多鍛煉……)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：spend too much time sending short messages（花太多的時間發(fā)送短信）；improve the situation（提高境況）；be fully aware of the harmful effects of frequent use of cell phones（充分意識到頻繁使用手機的危害）；beneficial to us（對我們有好處）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。