Question

16．如圖反映的是網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)代所出現(xiàn)的一種問(wèn)題，有些孩子沉溺于網(wǎng)上交流而忽視了與父母的溝通．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì)該漫畫的理解用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．該文應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)：
1．該漫畫告訴了我們什么；
2．你對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法；
3．我們?cè)撊绾沃鲃?dòng)和父母親溝通．
注意：1．表達(dá)時(shí)要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，不要僅做簡(jiǎn)單描述．
2．詞數(shù)150左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不得提及本人的相關(guān)信息．
參考詞匯：漫畫caricature．
Modern technology has many advantages．While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet，we also experience some new problems．This caricature describes one of them．                                   

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于有些孩子沉溺于網(wǎng)上交流而忽視了與父母的溝通這一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一該漫畫體現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容；二對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法；三分析社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)；四我們?cè)撊绾沃鲃?dòng)和父母親溝通．
高分句型：
1．Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet．句子里 no matter how 引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，表示"無(wú)論多么"；
 it 做形式主語(yǔ)，代指to chat with people from across the world on the Internet．
無(wú)論在網(wǎng)上和世界另一端的人聊天多么容易和有趣，都不能取代面對(duì)面的交流．
2．It is understandable that they want to know what's happening to us，what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies．句子里It做形式主語(yǔ)，代指that從句；what's happening to us，what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies．是三個(gè)并列的賓語(yǔ)從句．
他們想要知道我們發(fā)生了什么，我們交了什么樣的朋友，我們的學(xué)習(xí)怎樣，這是可以理解的．

解答 Modern technology has many advantages．While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet，we also experience some new problems．This caricature describes one of them．It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent．（該漫畫體現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容）I think it might be common，but it is totally unacceptable．Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet．【高分句型一】（對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法）
In most Chinese families，there is only one child．Obviously，we are the centre of our parents'attention．Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life．It is understandable that they want to know what's happening to us，what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies．【高分句型二】（分析社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)）
As far as I'm concerned，we should let our parents know us well．For example，we can tell them what's going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems．In that way，I'm sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better．（我們?cè)撊绾沃鲃?dòng)和父母親溝通）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
在同等情況下，如果我們選擇較為高級(jí)的詞匯和句式，得分會(huì)比較高，例如本文的主語(yǔ)從句It is understandable that they want to know what's happening to us，what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies．以及賓語(yǔ)從句It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent．又如As far as I'm concerned； turn to them for advice 等等．我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)要多加練習(xí)．