Question

5．某英文報(bào)正面向高中生招聘兼職記者，假如你是新華中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，有意應(yīng)聘這一工作．請(qǐng)你用英語給報(bào)社寫一封100～120個(gè)詞的申請(qǐng)信．信件應(yīng)包括以下主要內(nèi)容：
1．說明你對(duì)此工作感興趣的原因；
2．說明你的優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷等；
3．希望盡快得到回復(fù)．
注意：信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
                                                                   
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英語給報(bào)社寫一封100～120個(gè)詞的申請(qǐng)信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：說明你對(duì)此工作感興趣的原因；說明你的優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷等；希望盡快得到回復(fù) 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】1．本文緊扣要求，內(nèi)容完整，用了給出的信息．2．用了大量的短語和句型．比如：be interested in對(duì)…感興趣；be fit for適合；be fond of喜歡；do well in在…方面做得好；get long with與…相處；
I'm quite interested in the position as it can improve my English and other abilities．（高分句型一）
I'm fond of English and do well in speaking and writing．（高分句型二）
Besides，it's easy for me to get along well with everyone and I enjoy working with others．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
　　I'm glad to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters．I'm quite interested in the position as it can improve my English and other abilities．（高分句型一）
      I am a Senior Two student from Xinhua Middle School．I think I'm fit for the job．As a student，I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields．I'm fond of English and do well in speaking and writing．（高分句型二）I have won several prizes in all kinds of English contests inside or outside the school．Besides，it's easy for me to get along well with everyone and I enjoy working with others．（高分句型三）Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．Therefore，I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position．
       I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．
                                                                                                                                                                      Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．