6.假定你是李華,本學(xué)期你校開設(shè)了英語(yǔ)寫作課,由來(lái)自美國(guó)的外教Shelly來(lái)授課.由于你在英語(yǔ)寫作方面感到很困難,故打算寫一封電子郵件向她求助,要點(diǎn)包括:
(1)告訴她你的困難;
(2)尋求幫助:如何提高寫作技能,如何擴(kuò)大詞匯量,希望推薦寫作書目.
注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右(開頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
(2)可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容,使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫.
Dear Shelly,
I'm Li Hua,one of your students in the writing class.I'm writing to seek help from you.
I find English writing really difficult because my vocabulary is too small.(高分句型一)Before high school,I was studying in the countryside,where teachers didn't have many English books to read.(高分句型二)I was wondering whether you could help me improve my writing skills and enlarge my vocabulary.Would you please also recommend some books on writing to/for me so that I can read them by myself to improve my writing?(高分句型三)
I would be grateful if you could give me a hand.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息本學(xué)期你校開設(shè)了英語(yǔ)寫作課,由來(lái)自美國(guó)的外教Shelly來(lái)授課.由于你在英語(yǔ)寫作方面感到很困難,故打算寫一封電子郵件向她求助,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):(1)告訴她你的困難;(2)尋求幫助:如何提高寫作技能,如何擴(kuò)大詞匯量,希望推薦寫作書目.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):seek help尋求幫助;so that以便,為了;be grateful 感激的;give me a hand幫我一把
I find English writing really difficult because my vocabulary is too small.(高分句型一)
Before high school,I was studying in the countryside,where teachers didn't have many English books to read.(高分句型二)
Would you please also recommend some books on writing to/for me so that I can read them by myself to improve my writing?(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Shelly:
      I'm Li Hua,one of your students in your writing class. I'm writing to seek help from you.
      I find English writing really difficult because my vocabulary is too small.(高分句型一)Before high school,I was studying in the countryside,where teachers didn't have many English books to read.(高分句型二)I was wondering whether you could help me improve my writing skills and enlarge my vocabulary.Would you please also recommend some books on writing to/for me so that I can read them by myself to improve my writing?(高分句型三)
       I would be grateful if you could give me a hand.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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