Question

【題目】假設你叫李華，你的美國筆友Joe對中國新農村建設中正在實施的“廁所革命”很感興趣。因此，他寫信向你咨詢。請你給他寫一封回信，就相關問題作一番簡單的回答。內容包括:

1. 什么是“廁所革命”；

2.“廁所革命”的意義；

3. 具體措施有哪些。

注意:

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯:“廁所革命”(“toilet revolution”)改造(transform)排(水)(drain)

Dear Joe,

I’m so glad to hear from you again after so many days.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Joe,

I’m so glad to hear from you again after so many days. In your letter, you say you are curious about the “toilet revolution” in China, so I’d like to cast some light on it. The so-called “toilet revolution” is a term used to refer to some measures carried out in rural areas to transform the toilets. You may not have a clear concept about the structure and design of these toilets. The fact is that most of them are unscientific. With the development in China, our government has begun to attach significance to the environment and the well-being of the people. We realize the toilet is a symbol of civilization and a key factor to the beauty of the rural areas. Consequently, we are making a great change in the design of the toilets. For instance, we focus on how to drain away waste water into some centralized places and then we deal with the water in case it will flow at random. Hopefully my letter may clarify your puzzlement.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是應用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據提示可知，本文要求寫一封回信：假設你叫李華，你的美國筆友Joe對中國新農村建設中正在實施的“廁所革命”很感興趣。因此，他寫信向你咨詢。請你給他寫一封回信，就相關問題作一番簡單的回答。內容包括:1. 什么是“廁所革命”；2.“廁所革命”的意義；3. 具體措施有哪些。時態(tài)應為一般現在時。

第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如； toilet revolution（廁所革命），transform（改造），drain（排水），measure（措施）， well-being（幸福），civilization（文明）及symbol（標志）等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。