Question

【題目】假定你叫李華，筆友Tom要來南昌旅游，發(fā)郵件過來想了解南昌的情況，請(qǐng)你回復(fù)他的郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.來南昌旅行的最佳時(shí)間；

2.南昌最值得參觀的一些地方；

3.來南昌之前需要做其它什么準(zhǔn)備。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

滕王閣：Tengwang pavilion 八一起義紀(jì)念館Bayi uprising Memorial 革命的revolutionary

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to know you are going to visit Nanchang. I’m writing to inform you of something about Nanchang.

As far as I’m concerned, the best time to come to Nanchang is during the autumn, as the weather in this season is neither too hot nor too cold. As for the places to visit, I strongly advise you to go to Tengwang Pavilion, famous since the Tang Dynasty, from where you can overlook Ganjiang River. Besides, Bayi Uprising Memorial is another good choice, helping you have a good command of revolutionary history. Before coming, you’d better study a map of Nanchang to make your travel easier.

I do hope you will have a nice trip.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，向Tom介紹南昌的情況，幫助他了解旅游相關(guān)對(duì)信息。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

人稱：第一、三人稱為主

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法

要點(diǎn)：

1.來南昌旅行的最佳時(shí)間；

2.南昌最值得參觀的一些地方；

3.來南昌之前需要做其它什么準(zhǔn)備。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

Nanchang；Tengwang pavilion；Bayi uprising Memorial；revolutionary；inform sb. of sth.；as far as I’m concerned；neither … nor…；as for；overlook；Ganjiang River；have a good command of；you’d better do等

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m glad to know you are going to visit Nanchang.

2. I’m writing to inform you of something about Nanchang.

3. As far as I’m concerned, the best time to come to Nanchang is during the autumn, as the weather in this season is neither too hot nor too cold.

4. As for the places to visit, I strongly advise you to go to Tengwang Pavilion, famous since the Tang Dynasty, from where you can overlook Ganjiang River.

5. Bayi Uprising Memorial is another good choice, helping you have a good command of revolutionary history.

6. Before coming, you’d better study a map of Nanchang to make your travel easier.

7. I do hope you will have a nice trip.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表因果關(guān)系：as；

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：and；besides；as for；neither … nor…等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改