Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Jim 即將來中國旅游。他對中文名字非常感興趣，并且很想擁有一個中文名字，他向你求助。現(xiàn)請你給他寫一封信，包括以下內(nèi)容:

1. 介紹中文名字的特點；

2. 給他取一個中文名字并給出理由。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 文中不要出現(xiàn)真實姓名。

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear that you will come to visit China.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear that you will come to visit China. There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country.

A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. Unlike an English name, the family name is usually put first. And then a given name follows. As you are kind, smart and energetic, I thing Li Yang is most suitable for you. The family name is one of those shared by the largest number of Chinese. The given name means the sun in China.

I hope you will like your new name and have a really good time in China.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，1. 介紹中文名字的特點；2. 給他取一個中文名字并給出理由。第二，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，很高興聽說Jim要來中國，介紹擁有中國名字的重要性。第二段，1. 介紹中文名字的特點；2. 給他取一個中文名字并給出理由。第三段，表達希望。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語: culture，share, mean energetic, characters，significance， expectations，kind, smart energetic, fit in with, consists of ,the family name, given name ,be suitable for。

第四步：確定較為高級的句子:that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country. which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句 A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. As 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句As you are kind, smart and energetic, I thing Li Yang is most suitable for you。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接:however，besides，then。

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。