Question

4．某英文報紙就"中國城市普遍存在的交通擁堵問題"邀請中學生展開討論．請你參考所給要點，寫一篇英語短文．
要點：
1．簡要描述這一交通問題；
2．分析造成該問題的主要原因；
3．提出相應的建議．
注意：詞數(shù)100-120，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China，more and more traffic problems are arising．
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Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱式要點作文，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學習應該注重實用性，生活型的原則．行文人稱時態(tài)運用恰當準確，各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通暢．提綱類作文不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理地組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)．語言方面要特別注重簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山．運用高級詞匯：
in spite of  盡管
contribute to 引起；有助于
what's worse 更糟糕的是…
obey regulations 遵守規(guī)則
be aware of 明白；知曉

解答 In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China，more and more traffic problems are arising．A serious one is heavy traffic．Very often，we see cars in front of us parked on both sides of the street，driving down the street，or stuck in traffic with drivers waiting impatiently．So what on earth causes this problem．（描述交通問題）    In the first place，vast population contributes to heavy traffic and growing numbers of private cars add to the pressure on the severe traffic conditions．（高分句式一）What's worse，some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations，so it's not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic．（分析原因）
    Personally，I think that rather than promote private cars，it's better to improve the public transportation system with scientific road design and proper management．（高分句式二）More importantly，never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizens．（相應建議）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．