Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處 語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的間用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation. During my stay there, I spend a lot of time studying in the main library Widener. I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges, either doing research for my papers or read special edition books. The library, which it is named after its donor Harry Widener, stands right next to the Emerson building of philosophy. Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors, I was immediate bathed in warm light. I wandered around the library, fascinating to find one treasure after other.

The library is a amazing place. One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only he visits the library. For me, the library as well as the courses explain Harvard’s place as the home of devoted scholars.

Answer 1

【答案】1.spend改為spent2.knowledges改為knowledge3.read改為reading4.去掉it5.immediate改為immediately

6.fascinating改為fascinated7.other改為another8.a改為an9.only后加if/when10.explain改為explains

【解析】本文為一篇記敘文主要講述了作者去哈佛夏季學校度假時的的所見所感，講述作者對于哈佛這學校自己的看法，以及對哈佛各景物的介紹。

1.由于本文通篇主要時態(tài)為一般過去時，故將I spend a lot of time studying in the main library Widener. 中的spend改為spent。

2.由于knowledge知識為不可數名詞，故將I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges,中的knowledges改為knowledge。

3.根據前后時態(tài)一致的原則故將either doing research for my papers or read special edition books.中的read改成reading.

4.在非限制性頂于此哦那根據中which 指代句子中的主語或賓語在which it is named after its donor Harry Widener, 中which 在本句中作主語若加上it 的話則成分有所多余，故刪掉it.

5.在immediate bathed 中immediate 作狀語來修飾bath故此處immediate應當為副詞的形式故將是改為immediately。

6.在 I wandered around the library, fascinating to find one treasure after other.fascinating用來修飾人故應當將其改成fascinated。

7.After another 為固定搭配意為一個接著一個，故將other改成another

8.Amazing為元音字母開頭故前面不定冠詞要用an

9.Only if 固定搭配 只有...故在only后面加上if。

10.當as well as 鏈接兩個名詞作主語時 要以前面的名詞為準進行單雙數的變化故將explain改為explains