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13．你們班英語課學習到My New Teachers這個話題時，老師安排了一個學習任務：分組討論好老師的標準．你們小組認為以下方面很重要，現(xiàn)請你用英語寫成發(fā)言稿，代表小組向全班同學匯報．
1．具有淵博的知識．
2．有豐富的教學經(jīng)驗和好的教學方法．
3．熱愛學生，尊重學生，相信學生，善于與學生溝通．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出（但不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文章不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名與校名．
Good morning，everyone！Just now we had a discussion and set some standards for a good teacher．On one hand，he should have extensive knowledge，from whom we can learn a lot．On the other hand，he should have rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．Only with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods can we learn with great interest．Naturally，we can learn better and better．Last but not least，as a good teacher，he should have an affection for his students and show respect for his students．In addition，he should trust his students．What is more，he must be good at communicating with his students．
Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇發(fā)言稿，代表小組向全班同學匯報，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：好老師的標準：具有淵博的知識．有豐富的教學經(jīng)驗和好的教學方法．熱愛學生，尊重學生，相信學生，善于與學生溝通．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為分組討論好老師的標準．第二部分為好老師的標準．第三部分為結(jié)論．
重點短語與句型：
set some standards設立標準
on one hand 一方面
On the other hand另一方面
extensive knowledge淵博的知識
Last but not least最后但同樣重要的是，
高分句型一：On one hand，he should have extensive knowledge，from whom we can learn a lot．此句用了介詞加關(guān)系代詞引導的定語從句
高分句型二：Only with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods can we learn with great interest．此句only+介詞短語，主句部分倒裝

解答 Good morning，everyone！Just now we had a discussion and set some standards for a good teacher．（分組討論好老師的標準）    
    On one hand，he should have extensive knowledge，from whom we can learn a lot．（高分句型一）On the other hand，he should have rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．Only with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods can we learn with great interest（高分句型二）．Naturally，we can learn better and better．Last but not least，as  a good teacher，he should have an affection for his students and show respect for his students．In addition，he should trust his students．What is more，he must be good at communicating with his students．（好老師的標準）
     Thank you for your listening．（結(jié)論）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧