Question

隨著留學(xué)熱潮的不斷升溫，“微留學(xué)”也迅速進(jìn)入學(xué)生的視野�！拔⒘魧W(xué)”是指學(xué)生通過利用假期時(shí)間組團(tuán)去國外名校進(jìn)行短期的游歷和學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)留學(xué)生活有個(gè)初步體驗(yàn)。對(duì)此，你們班舉行了一次以“中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該進(jìn)行微留學(xué)”為主題的班會(huì)。下表是討論的結(jié)果，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇文章并發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。
參考詞匯：微留學(xué)short-term overseas study tours或micro study tours
虛榮心vanity

贊成：60%	反對(duì)：40%
（1）更好的了解國外名校； （2）提前體驗(yàn)留學(xué)生活。	（1）費(fèi)用太高，多數(shù)家庭無力承擔(dān)； （2）有些學(xué)生“留學(xué)”是為了跟風(fēng)、炫耀。
你的觀點(diǎn)……

注意：詞數(shù)120左右。
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                          
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                       

Answer 1

Recently we have had a discussion about whether middle school students should go abroad for short-term overseas study tours. Opinions are divided as follows.
About 60% of us think it wise to go on short-term overseas study tours, through which we can get closer to some famous schools and have a better knowledge of them. Meanwhile, we can also experience the life of studying abroad ahead of schedule.
The rest of us hold different views. In their opinion, the fees are too high for most parents to afford. Besides, some middle school students just want to follow the trend and show off.
Personally, short-term overseas study tours may be a motivation for us to study harder. It can also serve as a test showing whether a student a able to live an independent life abroad or not.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，話題是關(guān)于出國留學(xué)的話題，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).但是你的觀點(diǎn)要自己組織，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如go abroad，as follows，get closer to，have a better knowledge of，ahead of schedule，in one’s opinion，show off.；還運(yùn)用句型：which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如Meanwhile，Besides，Personally, whether … or  not…，and等等。