Question

大氣污染已嚴重影響到我們的日常生活。就霧霾天氣的防護措施以及如何治理大氣污染等大家關(guān)心的問題，相關(guān)專家提出了一些建議。請根據(jù)專家的建議寫一篇英語短文，用于你校的英語校報。
【寫作內(nèi)容】
保護措施：學(xué)校暫停體育課，平時盡量少開門窗，多喝水，多吃水果
治理措施：
個人方面：少開空調(diào)，多乘公共交通工具
政府方面：立法嚴懲污染企業(yè)，提高公民環(huán)保意識。
【詞匯】企業(yè)：enterprise  空調(diào)： air conditioner     意識：awareness
【寫作要求】
1、只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；
2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3、短文的第一句已經(jīng)給出，不計算在5個句子中。
【評分標準】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Given that smog from air pollution has seriously affected our daily life, an expert on health and environmental protection gives some advice.

Answer 1

Given that smog from air pollution has seriously affected our daily life, an expert on health and environmental protection gives some advice.
We are advised to stop outdoor activities like PE lessons at schools and try to let the doors and windows remain shut most of the time to keep smog out. Meanwhile, we should drink more water and eat more fruits, which are considered to be helpful in such a situation. To deal with air pollution, we individuals have apart to play, such as using air conditioners less and taking pubic transports more often.
Of course, the government should make/ set up laws to punish those enterprises which cause serious pollution. Last but not least, it is of great necessity to improve the public awareness of environmental protection, which will benefit us in the long run.

試題分析：考查提綱作文，考生首先要仔細審題，話題是霧霾天氣的防護措施以及如何治理大氣污染，要點是已經(jīng)給出；要考慮以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點。尤其是內(nèi)容要點要把握準確到位，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，因為只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性�？忌�要多使用復(fù)雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如：keep sth out 不讓…進來，deal with 處理，Last but not least最后但同樣重要的是, in the long run.從長遠角度看，We are advised to stop outdoor activities like PE lessons at schools and try to let the doors and windows remain shut most of the time to keep smog out. Meanwhile, we should drink more water and eat more fruits, which are considered to be helpful in such a situation. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句，To deal with air pollution, we individuals have a part to play, such as using air conditioners less and taking pubic transports more often. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語，Of course, the government should make/ set up laws to punish those enterprises which cause serious pollution. 這句話也使用了定語從句， it is of great necessity to improve the public awareness of environmental protection, which will benefit us in the long run.這句話用了it做形式主語和非限制性定語從句。