Question

高中生活已經(jīng)開(kāi)始，你將面對(duì)新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義給你的初中老師寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勀愦蛩闳绾伟才拍愕母咧猩�活。�?nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
1. 確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)             2. 改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法
3. 學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活                 4. 參加各種課外活動(dòng)
5. 處理好與同學(xué)的關(guān)系
注意：1. 短文內(nèi)容要連貫、完整       2. 詞數(shù)：100左右
My dear teacher,                                                                         
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
My dear teacher,
I have been in senior high school for a month. After I enter senior high, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself. In my spare time, I’ll take part in different school activities, for example, I’ll often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers. I think I will have a wonderful life in my new school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是一篇書(shū)信應(yīng)用文。文章給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)提示，要求學(xué)生能夠連貫的將內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全：（1）確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)；（2）改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法；（3）學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活；（4）參加各種課外活動(dòng)；（5）處理好與同學(xué)的關(guān)系。2.人稱(chēng)：采用第一人稱(chēng)；3.時(shí)態(tài)：將來(lái)時(shí)為主；4.恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型；5.使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)使文章表達(dá)自然，流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】使用了插入語(yǔ)：What’s more, for example, In my spare time, In addition,等；使用了從句：After I enter senior high, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning； as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own；  I think I will have a wonderful life in my new school.