Question

13．假如你叫李華，今年寒假馬上來(lái)臨，某公司要招聘臨時(shí)翻譯，你向該公司交一份申請(qǐng)書(shū)，謀求這個(gè)職位．可從個(gè)人英語(yǔ)水平、類似工作學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷、與人交往能力等方面進(jìn)行闡述．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的抬頭和落款已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
Dear Sir or Madam，
In an advertisement I know that your company is in need of a temporary interpreter．I would like to apply for the job．（寫信目的）
Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．（高分句型一）I took great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．（高分句型二）Thanks to my fluent spoken English，I'll be equal to the job．I once participated in an English speaking contest and finished first place and that proved my perfect oral English and enhanced my confidence．（高分句型三）（個(gè)人英語(yǔ)水平及工作經(jīng)歷）Besides，I'm outgoing and like communicating with others，and as a result，I make friends with people from all walks of life．I can keep a calm mind even facing strangers，which may assure me to be a qualified interpreter．（高分句型四） （交際能力）
In a word，I'm full self-confident that I can get the position and do it well．（高分句型五）（衷心希望）
Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．
Yours faithfully
Li Hua

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 假如你叫李華，上個(gè)月剛剛高中畢業(yè)，某公司要招聘臨時(shí)翻譯，你向該公司遞交一份申請(qǐng)書(shū)，謀求這個(gè)職位．可從個(gè)人英語(yǔ)水平、類似工作學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷、與人交往能力等方面進(jìn)行闡述．這是一篇提綱類作文，需要考生用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，應(yīng)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章簡(jiǎn)潔明了，把需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)清晰的表達(dá)了出來(lái)，并且做了適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展，其間也運(yùn)用了一些連接詞和高級(jí)的句型．Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．我已經(jīng)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)十年了，很好的完成這件事．現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)．great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．我在很小的年紀(jì)就對(duì)英語(yǔ)產(chǎn)生了很大的興趣，這對(duì)我的英語(yǔ)水平有很大的好處．這一句采用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句來(lái)表達(dá)．最后一句Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．感謝你的考慮，期待你盡快的回復(fù)．以表期望，這種求職信中經(jīng)常會(huì)用到．文章中還有一些短語(yǔ)用得恰到好處，比如in need of急需；Thanks to因?yàn)�，后面只能接名詞不能接句子；In a word總之等等．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
     In an advertisement I know that your company is in need of a temporary interpreter．I would like to apply for the job．（寫信目的）
     Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．（高分句型一）I took great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．（高分句型二）Thanks to my fluent spoken English，I'll be equal to the job．I once participated in an English speaking contest and finished first place and that proved my perfect oral English and enhanced my confidence．（高分句型三）（個(gè)人英語(yǔ)水平及工作經(jīng)歷）Besides，I'm outgoing and like communicating with others，and as a result，I make friends with people from all walks of life．I can keep a calm mind even facing strangers，which may assure me to be a qualified interpreter．（高分句型四） （交際能力）
      In a word，I'm full self-confident that I can get the position and do it well．（高分句型五）（衷心希望）
      Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．
                                                                                                                                                            Yours faithfully
                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．