Question

1．假如你叫李華，是一位英語愛好者．在一個英語學習論壇上，你看到某網友發(fā)出的求助帖：
I always have so many things to do．It seems that I never have enough time to get things done．I don't know how to manage my time effectively．Can anyone offer me some advice Tom
請根據帖子的內容給他提出幾點建議．注意：詞數110左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
 It is of great importance （1）to learn to make better use of your time（2）．更充分運用時間對學習非常重要．
（1）be of+抽象名詞=be+形容詞；be of importance 表示"重要"；書面表達中用短語代替單詞是一個增加亮點的常見手法．
（2）該句中it為形式主語，真正的主語是動詞不定式to learn to make better use of your time．
句型二：
it is necessary that you make full use of tiny pieces of time．你有必要充分利用零碎的時間．
該句為it做形式主語that 引導的主語從句，構成句型"It is+necessary/important/essential…+that"，其中從句中的動詞往往用"should+動詞原形"，should可以省略．
句型三：
focus on your most productive time of day and （1）you will get twice the result with half the effort（2）．聚焦于一天中最富有成效的時間你會得到事半功倍的效果．
（1）本句運用句型"祈使句+and/or+一般將來時的句子"=If引導的條件句+主句．
（2）get twice the result with half the effort事半功倍．

解答 Hi，Tom，
     It is of great importance to learn to make better use of your time【高分句型一】．I'd like to offer some advice（點明主題）．
     First of all，you should make a list and select the most important and urgent things．It is wise to finish them first．What's more，it is necessary that you make full use of tiny pieces of time【高分句型二】．For example，you can do some reading when you are waiting for a bus，or practice listening on your way to school．Last but not least，focus on your most productive time of day and you will get twice the result with half the effort【高分句型三】（具體建議）．
   In a word，time，like water in sponge，can be squeezed out if you like．I hope you will find my advice useful（總結--表達希望）．

點評 寫作時首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時態(tài)；審要點．其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用，從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝、強調句型等都是可考慮的高級句型；詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強表達的氣勢；再次，運用關聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．