Question

1．假如你叫李華，是一位英語(yǔ)愛(ài)好者．在一個(gè)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)論壇上，你看到某網(wǎng)友發(fā)出的求助帖：
I always have so many things to do．It seems that I never have enough time to get things done．I don't know how to manage my time effectively．Can anyone offer me some advice Tom
請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容給他提出幾點(diǎn)建議．注意：詞數(shù)110左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
 It is of great importance （1）to learn to make better use of your time（2）．更充分運(yùn)用時(shí)間對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)非常重要．
（1）be of+抽象名詞=be+形容詞；be of importance 表示"重要"；書(shū)面表達(dá)中用短語(yǔ)代替單詞是一個(gè)增加亮點(diǎn)的常見(jiàn)手法．
（2）該句中it為形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞不定式to learn to make better use of your time．
句型二：
it is necessary that you make full use of tiny pieces of time．你有必要充分利用零碎的時(shí)間．
該句為it做形式主語(yǔ)that 引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，構(gòu)成句型"It is+necessary/important/essential…+that"，其中從句中的動(dòng)詞往往用"should+動(dòng)詞原形"，should可以省略．
句型三：
focus on your most productive time of day and （1）you will get twice the result with half the effort（2）．聚焦于一天中最富有成效的時(shí)間你會(huì)得到事半功倍的效果．
（1）本句運(yùn)用句型"祈使句+and/or+一般將來(lái)時(shí)的句子"=If引導(dǎo)的條件句+主句．
（2）get twice the result with half the effort事半功倍．

解答 Hi，Tom，
     It is of great importance to learn to make better use of your time【高分句型一】．I'd like to offer some advice（點(diǎn)明主題）．
     First of all，you should make a list and select the most important and urgent things．It is wise to finish them first．What's more，it is necessary that you make full use of tiny pieces of time【高分句型二】．For example，you can do some reading when you are waiting for a bus，or practice listening on your way to school．Last but not least，focus on your most productive time of day and you will get twice the result with half the effort【高分句型三】（具體建議）．
   In a word，time，like water in sponge，can be squeezed out if you like．I hope you will find my advice useful（總結(jié)--表達(dá)希望）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)；審要點(diǎn)．其次要考慮高分詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用，從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級(jí)句型；詞語(yǔ)和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢(shì)；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．