Question

15．上個月學(xué)校組織去南湖公園遠足，盡管天公不作美，但仍是一段難忘的回憶，你很想與在國外念書的朋友Jack分享你的經(jīng)歷，請用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的信．
要求：1）介紹遠足的時間、地點以及人物．
2）簡要說明你的心情感受以及遠足過后你的感悟．
3）文中不得透露個人姓名及班級名稱．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
I would like to tell you something about my hiking，which brought us great fun，though it was raining that day．我想告訴你一些有關(guān)我們遠足的事情，盡管天正在下雨，但是我們玩的很高興．
高分句型二：
We played some games，which  not only relaxed the pressure of learning，but also enhanced our feelings我們還玩了許多游戲，這不僅可以放松學(xué)習(xí)的壓力，還能增進我們的感情．

解答 Dear Jack，
   I haven't received your letter for a long time．I would like to tell you something about my hiking，which brought us great fun，though it was raining that day．（高分句型一）
   Last Sunday，I went hiking with my classmates in Nanhu Park．We met at 8a．m．a(chǎn)t the school gate and then we went to Nanhu Park by bus，which  promoted our feelings．We prepared some food and some useful things．In the morning，we climbed the hill and flew a kite．When we felt a little tired，we  stopped and enjoyed our lunch．What a delicious food!Cookies，apples，fruit，even sweets!After a good lunch，we  continued our trip．We played some games，which  not only relaxed the pressure of learning，but also enhanced our feelings（高分句型二）．What a funny day!
　  Even though we are in different countries，I'll always stay in touch with you．I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．