Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Li Daiyu and Liu Qian were on a trip to Canada to visit their cousins on the Atlantic coast. Rather than taking the plane all the way, they took the train from west to east crossing by Canada. The thought that they could go across whole continent was exciting.

Canada is the second large country in the world. People say Vancouver is Canada’s most beautiful city surrounding by mountains and the Pacific Ocean. On the northern coast of Vancouver, it is so wet there that the trees are extremely tall, some measured over 90 meters.

That afternoon aboard the train, the cousins settled down in their seat. They manage to catch sight of some mountain goats or even a grizzly bear. They had learned where most Canadians live within 320 kilometers of the USA border and the population is only slightly over thirty million.

Answer 1

【答案】1. taking → take

2.去掉by

3. 在whole前加the

4. large → largest

5. surrounding → surrounded

6. measured → measuring

7. seat → seats

8. manage → managed

9. or → and

10. where→ that 或去掉where

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了，李黛玉和劉謙去加拿大訪問(wèn)大西洋沿岸表親時(shí)路中的所見(jiàn)所聞。

1. 考查動(dòng)詞原形。Rather than在此處用作連詞，后接動(dòng)詞原形與后面謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞took并列，意為“而不是”，應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞原形take。故將taking改為take。

2. 考查及物動(dòng)詞。cross（穿過(guò)）是及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接接名詞，去掉by。故去掉by。

3. 考查冠詞。此處指“加拿大這整片大陸”，是特指，應(yīng)用定冠詞the表特指。故在whole前加the。

4. 考查最高級(jí)。此處指“加拿大是世界上第二大國(guó)家”，所以用形容詞最高級(jí)。故將large改為largest。

5. 考查過(guò)去分詞。名詞city 和動(dòng)詞surround是邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用過(guò)去分詞表被動(dòng)，作名詞city的后置定語(yǔ)。故將surrounding改為surrounded。

6. 考查現(xiàn)在分詞。此處是獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，動(dòng)詞measure是不及物動(dòng)詞，沒(méi)有被動(dòng)，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞。故將measured改為measuring。

7. 考查名詞的數(shù)。此處的座位不只一個(gè)，應(yīng)用seat的復(fù)數(shù)。故將seat改為seats。

8. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文事情已發(fā)生，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故將manage改為managed。

9. 考查連詞。此處意為“看見(jiàn)了一些山羊和一只灰熊”，表并列，用并列連詞and。故將or改為and。

10. 考查賓語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞。learn后接一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，從句是陳述句，不缺少任何成分，引導(dǎo)詞不做任何成分，無(wú)意義，應(yīng)用that或省略that。故將where改為that 或去掉where。