Question

【題目】短文改錯

下面是你同學的一篇英文習作，請你幫助修改這篇作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改僅限一次。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at more than $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position among China’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 rich people.

Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introduced to the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in a tour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】his→whose

【2】owned→owns

【3】rich→richest

【4】fought→fighting

【5】去掉in

【6】he和introduced 之間加上was

【7】before→when/after

【8】in→ on

【9】obviously→obvious

【10】all→ both

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】his→whose 考察定語從句，非限制性定語從句中用關系代詞whose。代指上文Jack Ma的。

【2】owned→owns 考察時態(tài)的一致性，這里闡述的是一般的事實情況，故owned→owns。

【3】rich→richest 考察形容詞最高級，句意：但是他仍然在世界10大富翁之外。這里應該用最高級，表示世界上最富有的10個人，故rich→richest。

【4】fought→fighting 現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，動詞fight和主語 Ma主動關系，故fought→fighting。

【5】去掉in 考察定語從句，關系代詞which指代先行詞a translation agency，在定語從句中做主語，故去掉in。

【6】he和introduced 之間加上was考察動詞被動語態(tài)，主語他和動詞介紹是被動關系，故he和introduced 之間加上was。

【7】before→when/after 考察連詞，句意：當他被偶然的被任命帶美國游客 Jerry Yang參觀長城時/之后，他的命運注定要改變。根據(jù)句意故before→when/after 。

【8】in→ on 考察介詞，take sb on a tour 帶某人去參觀。

【9】obvious→obviously 考察副詞，句意：很明顯這次會面對于他們都是轉折點。這里應該用副詞修飾句子。故obvious→obviously。

【10】all→ both 考察代詞，句意：很明顯這次會面對于他們兩位都是轉折點。根據(jù)上文可知是兩個人見面，故all→ both。