Question

1．假如你叫王麗，是一位高中生．請你用英語給報(bào)社寫一封信，反映如下情況并談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ?br />現(xiàn)在有很多學(xué)生使用手機(jī)一是認(rèn)為這是種時(shí)髦二是認(rèn)為便于跟家人和朋友聯(lián)系．
一些學(xué)生把手機(jī)帶進(jìn)教室，在課堂上經(jīng)常聽見手機(jī)的鈴聲．破壞課堂紀(jì)律．
有的同學(xué)還在課堂上發(fā)短信息，浪費(fèi)寶貴的時(shí)間．
建議：
教室是學(xué)習(xí)的地方，需要安靜．
學(xué)生不應(yīng)該在教室中使用手機(jī)，應(yīng)該集中注意力學(xué)習(xí)．
（附：自己再想一條建議）
注意：
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Dear Editor，
I'm a senior high student．                 
Yours sincerely
Wang Li．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
They are called Smartphone Addicts，who are buried in ②using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads①．
他們被稱為"低頭族"，整天沉浸于低頭玩他們的智能手機(jī)或筆記本電腦．
①本句為who引導(dǎo)的非限定性的定語從句，先行詞Smartphone Addicts在從句中作主語．
②be buried in doing sth．意為：專心于，沉浸于做某事．
句型二：
As a matter of fact①，they can take up reading②to kill the time during their trips．
事實(shí)上，在他們的旅程中，他們可以開始通過閱讀來消磨時(shí)間．
①As a matter of fact：用以加強(qiáng)語氣，意思是：事實(shí)上，實(shí)際上，其實(shí)．
②take up doing sth．意為：開始做某事，開始從事某事．

解答 Dear Editor，
    I'm a senior high student．It is a common sight to see many young people engaged in emailing，twittering or chatting using their smartphones．It might be the best choice to kill time when they are on dull journey．（陳述了年輕人將手機(jī)當(dāng)成消磨時(shí)間的娛樂工具的這一現(xiàn)象．）
    They are called Smartphone Addicts，who are buried in using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads．【高分句型一】This is very harmful．On one hand，they keep away from their friends or family．On the other hand，being busy with their smartphones can cause accidents，which brings them more pains than pleasure．（從兩個(gè)方面分析了"低頭族"對手機(jī)產(chǎn)生依賴以及低頭玩手機(jī)的危害．）
    As a matter of fact，they can take up reading to kill the time during their trips．【高分句型二】Reading books or newspapers can also enrich their knowledge．The pleasure from reading is a pleasant experience they can't have from using smartphones．（發(fā)表自己的看法即：用閱讀來代替玩手機(jī)將會(huì)獲取更多的樂趣．）
                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                           Wang Li

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