Question

10．實現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會傾聽．請你敘述傾聽的重要性，并說明你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
As we all know，being a good listener①plays an important role in②making effective communication and establishing good relationship among people．
眾所周知，做一名優(yōu)秀的傾聽者在進行有效的溝通和建立良好的人際關(guān)系方面起著很重要的作用．
①being a good listener為動名詞形式作主語．
②play an important role in doing sth．意為：在（做）某事方面發(fā)揮著重要的作用．
句型二：
In addition①，eye contact is necessary，but you remember neither to make too much nor ②too little，or ③it may cause misunderstanding．
此外，眼神的交流也很有必要，但你要記住既不要有太多也不要有太少，否則會引起誤會．
①In addition意為：另外，此外．
②neither…nor…意為：既不…，也不…
③連詞or表示一種否定的條件，意為"否則"．

解答 Being a Good Listener
    As we all know，being a good listener plays an important role in making effective communication and establishing good relationship among people．【高分句型一】（總述傾聽的重要性）The reason is that while listening attentively to others，your respect can be felt by the speaker．Besides，you understand what is being said better and the conversation will go more smoothly．（說明認為傾聽很重要的理由）If parents are willing to listen carefully to what their children are saying，generation gap is sure to be narrowed．If teachers like to listen to their students，they will find it easier to tailor their teaching to the students'needs．If the students are patient enough to listen to each other，not only will the friendship be promoted，but they can also learn from each other，thus making up for their own disadvantages．（舉例說明傾聽的好處）
    Being a good listener is more than listening with head nodding．From my perspective，you should pay attention to the speaker's body language，for it presents the speaker's feeling and emotions．In addition，eye contact is necessary，but you remember neither to make too much nor too little，or it may cause misunderstanding．【高分句型二】（介紹做一名優(yōu)秀的聆聽者的表現(xiàn)．）
    In short，being a good listener is very important，which can never be stressed too much．Therefore，be a good listener from now on!That's all for my personal opinion．（與第一段相呼應(yīng)，重申自己的觀點）

點評 寫開放類作文時，首先應(yīng)明確寫作的主題，寫作時結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容要條理清晰，上下文銜接要合理；其次應(yīng)注意選取相應(yīng)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及短語，注意時態(tài)及人稱的正確使用．