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1．This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank．An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank．Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down．To make things bad，his money was lying in all direction．In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there，not know what to do．Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just picked．The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed．To my great joy，there are now a lot of nice people in your life．It's true what honesty is more important than money!

Answer 1

分析 本文作者通過(guò)講述今天早上在上學(xué)的路碰到的一件好人好事，旨在說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在在我們的生活中有很多的好人，并且誠(chéng)實(shí)確實(shí)要比金錢更重要．

解答 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by
what I saw outside a bank．An old man was counting his
money in the front of the bank．Suddenly a young man came
running and knocked him down．To make things bad，his money
was lying in all direction．In no time the people aroundrushto
pick the money up while the old man stood there，notknowwhat
to do．Surprisingly，everyone gave back the money they had just
picked∧．The old man counted the money again and found that
not a single bill was missed．To my great joy，there are now
a lot of nice people inyourlife．It's true what honesty is more
important than money!

詳解：
1．deep改為deeply     考查副詞   此處用來(lái)修飾動(dòng)詞 moved，故用副詞deeply．
2．去掉front 之前的the   考查固定短語(yǔ)   in front of 意為：在…的前面；故去掉front 之前的the．
3．bad改為worse    考查固定搭配    to make things worse意為：使事情更糟糕的是；故用worse．
4．direction改為directions   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)   此處指的是：所有方向；應(yīng)使用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式；故用directions．
5．rush改為rushed  考查時(shí)態(tài)  根據(jù)上文可知，此處指的是發(fā)生在今天早上的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；故用rushed．
6．know改為knowing   考查現(xiàn)在分詞   此處在句中作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞know與其邏輯主語(yǔ)the old man 構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，表示正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作；故用現(xiàn)在分詞knowing．
7．picked之后加up   考查固定短語(yǔ)   pick up意為：撿起；故在picked之后加up．
8．missed改為missing   考查現(xiàn)在分詞   此處在句中作表語(yǔ)，說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)bill（指物）的情況，應(yīng)使用由現(xiàn)在分詞轉(zhuǎn)化來(lái)的形容詞，故用missing．
9．your改為our   考查人稱的一致性   本句的意思是：令我高興的是，現(xiàn)在在我們的生活中有很多的好人；此處與前面的人稱 my 相呼應(yīng)，指的是：在我們的生活中，故用our． 
10．what改為that  考查固定句型結(jié)構(gòu)    It's+形容詞+that從句；其中it是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是that從句；故用that．

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