Question

【題目】假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。

Dear Tom,

How is everything going with you? In your last e-mail you asked me to tell you something about Isaac Asimov. Here is something I know about him.

Isaac Asimov, an American scientist and a writer, was born on 2 January, 1920. Asimov’s talent for writing became obvious at the age eleven. He told a friend two chapter of a story he had written. The friend thought he was retelling a story from a book, what surprised Asimov and from that moment, he started to take himself serious as a writer. Asimov began having stories publish in science fiction magazines in 1939. Throughout her life, Asimov received many awards, both for his science fiction books and his science books. He died in 1992 as a result of a HIV infection that he has got from a blood transfusion nine years earlier .

That’s what I know about Isaac Asimov. I greatly hope the information is help to you in a way.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】刪除and后的a

age后加of

chapter→chapters

what→which

serious→seriously

publish→published

her→his

a→an

has→had

10. help→helpful

【解析】

這是一封信，在信里作者給朋友介紹了美國科學(xué)家兼作家艾薩克.阿西莫夫的生平。

考查零冠詞。此處考查身份兼具只需要一個冠詞，結(jié)合文意艾薩克.阿西莫夫即是科學(xué)家又是作家，此處是身份兼具，只需一個冠詞，故刪除and后的a。

考查介詞。此處考查短語at the age of在幾歲，故在age后加of

考查名詞的數(shù)。chapter（章節(jié)）是可數(shù)名詞，又前面有two，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將chapter改為chapters。

考查非限定性定語從句。分析句子可知，此處是非限制性定語從句，先行句在從句中充當(dāng)主語，故用關(guān)系代詞which，故將what改為which。

考查副詞。此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾動詞take, 故將serious改為seriously。

考查非謂語動詞。分析句子可知，此處應(yīng)用非謂語動詞，邏輯主語stories和publish(出版)之間是被動關(guān)系，故用過去分詞作賓補，故將publish改為published。

考查代詞。結(jié)合前文可知，艾薩克.阿西莫夫是男性，故應(yīng)用his代指“他的”，故將her改為his。

考查冠詞。結(jié)合句意可知，此處應(yīng)為“一次艾滋病毒感染”，是泛指，故用不定冠詞，又HIV是元音音素開頭，故用an，故將a改為an。

考查過去完成時。結(jié)合上下文可知， “他因輸血獲得艾滋病毒”的事情發(fā)生在過去的9年以前，即過去之過去，故應(yīng)用過去完成時，故將has改為had。

考查形容詞。此處應(yīng)用形容詞作為is的表語，故將help改為helpful。