Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)

為了保護(hù)環(huán)境、節(jié)約能源，越來(lái)越多的人選擇低碳生活。作為中學(xué)生，我們能為環(huán)保做些什么呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫一份倡議書，呼吁你們班同學(xué)愛(ài)護(hù)環(huán)境、保護(hù)環(huán)境。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. 少使用塑料袋；

2. 循環(huán)使用舊課本；

3. 少乘電梯，節(jié)約用水、用電；

4. 多植樹；

5. 最好步行或騎自行車上學(xué)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右(格式、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

My fellow students,

Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do to protect the environment?

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In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment. I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in.

Answer 1

【答案】My fellow students,

Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do to protect the environment?

To reduce white pollution we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping. Use cloth bags instead. We should try to reuse old textbooks, so people needn’t cut down more trees to make paper. In order to save energy we should use the lift less and take the stairs instead. We should also save water and electricity. And we should plant more trees so that the air will be fresher. Besides, it would be better if we walked or rode a bike to school.

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment. I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in.

【解析】

本文雖然內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單，但作者使用了一些好的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如white pollution，go shopping，try to do，reuse old textbooks，cut down，make paper，in order to，so that，ride a bike to school等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)To reduce white pollution we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping./ In order to save energy we should use the lift less and take the stairs instead.和And we should plant more trees so that the air will be fresher./Besides, it would be better if we walked or rode a bike to school.等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。