Question

【題目】請以My best friend為題，寫一篇70詞左右的短文。

參考信息：1. 年齡 2. 外貌描述 3. 愛好習(xí)慣 4.你喜歡他/她的理由

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Answer 1

【答案】My best friend is Tom. He is 13 years old. He has short hair and a big nose. He is fat and strong. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He always goes hiking with me. I like him because he always helps me when I need him. He is very kind and often let me feel happy.

【解析】

本文是材料作文。首先，寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，把握寫作要求和寫作目的。本文要求以My best friend.寫一篇短文，介紹自己最好的朋友，故應(yīng)該用第三人稱作主語。其次，根據(jù)參考信息提示可知時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，寫作內(nèi)容包括年齡、外貌、愛好習(xí)慣、以及喜歡他/她的理由等等，注意不可遺漏要點。再次，要熟練使用所學(xué)短語、句型，注意連詞的使用等，是文章語句通順、符合邏輯。最后，要檢查格式、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點等。本文行文連貫，要點全面，還運用了亮點短語及句型，如go hiking, play basketball, like doing, because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句及when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句等。