【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改l0處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

【答案】

【1】come改為came

【2】luckily改為lucky

【3】student改為students

【4】or改為and

【5】where改為which

【6】much改為many

【7】was后加a

【8】they改為we

【9】excited改為exciting

【10】刪除the

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，敘述了作者在英國(guó)的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷以及個(gè)人感受。

【1】come改為came 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本句的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)是last week，這是一個(gè)過(guò)去時(shí)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用過(guò)去式came。

【2】luckily改為lucky 考查形容詞。在英語(yǔ)中通常使用形容詞做表語(yǔ)，副詞通常做狀語(yǔ)。所以本句中用形容詞lucky放在系動(dòng)詞was的后面做表語(yǔ)。

【3】student改為students 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。短語(yǔ)“one of...”的后面要接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。所以本句只有復(fù)數(shù)形式students。

【4】or改為and 考查連詞。在肯定句中使用and連接并列成分，在否定句通常使用or表示并列關(guān)系。我們參觀了很多對(duì)方，像倫敦，牛津和湖區(qū)。

【5】where改為which 考查定語(yǔ)從句。本題定語(yǔ)從句中中系動(dòng)詞was前面的是主語(yǔ)，而關(guān)系副詞where不能在句中作主語(yǔ)，只能做狀語(yǔ)。只有關(guān)系代詞才可以在句中做主語(yǔ)。本句中關(guān)系代詞which指代先行詞British culture and history在句中做主語(yǔ)，引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。

【6】much改為many 考查形容詞。本句中使用many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式buildings；而much通常修飾不可數(shù)名詞。

【7】was后加a 考查冠詞。本句中名詞pity是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，意為“遺憾的事情”，前面使用a修飾，泛指一件令人遺憾的事情。句意：遺憾的是我們?cè)谀抢锏臅r(shí)候，雨下得很大。

【8】they改為we 考查代詞。本文敘述的是作者在英國(guó)的經(jīng)歷，所以是“我們?cè)谀抢铩�，而不是“他們�(cè)谀抢铩薄?/span>

【9】excited改為exciting 考查形容詞。形容詞excited感到興奮的，推測(cè)修飾人；exciting令人興奮的，推測(cè)修飾事物。

【10】刪除the 考查冠詞。本句中Britain是一個(gè)表示國(guó)家名詞的抽象名詞，要單獨(dú)使用，前面不需要使用冠詞修飾。

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