Question

【題目】假定你是李華，收到好友Jim寄來的明信片，邀請你加入WCS (Wildlife Conservation Society)的暑期項(xiàng)目。你對此非常感興趣，請你寫一封回信給他表示祝賀，并了解相關(guān)信息。

Dear Li Hua,

How excited I am when I’m accepted as a volunteer of WCS! You know I have been saving the abandoned animals. So in this upcoming summer. I can do more to help the lovely animals and even the endangered ones. And I really expect you to join us! I am sure we will make a difference to nature and people!

Yours,

Jim

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jim,

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Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am very proud of you when knowing that you are admitted to be a volunteer of Wildlife Conservation Society. Please accept my heartiest congratulations on this meaningful experience in your upcoming summer.

Having always appreciated your devotion to wildlife conservation, I firmly believe that it is your enthusiasm and determination that make you selected to be the volunteer. How I wish to join you and be a volunteer like you! You know I am also interested in wildlife and eager to do something meaningful in my summer holidays. Would you please tell me how I could join the Society? And where can I apply for it? Is it necessary for me to do some preparations, such as filling in the application form, passing the language test or anything else?

I will appreciate it if you could send me more information! I am sure that it is a good chance to enrich my knowledge of wildlife conservation and I will make even greater effort to do something for the nature and people.

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，收到好友Jim寄來的明信片，邀請你加入WCS (Wildlife Conservation Society)的暑期項(xiàng)目。你對此非常感興趣，請你寫一封回信給他表示祝賀，并了解相關(guān)信息。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：be proud of；be admitted to；devotion to；be interested in；eager to do...；apply for；make effort等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。