Question

【題目】假如你是在寧夏學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)留學(xué)生Mike，最近從《新消息》上得知有大量的紅嘴鷗（gulls )落戶銀川的湖泊，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)報(bào)社寫(xiě)一份信， 內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表達(dá)自己的喜悅心情 ；

2.對(duì)保護(hù)紅嘴鷗提出一些建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir/Madame,

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Yours sincerely

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madame,

I am Mike, a British student studying in Ningxia. Knowing from your newspaper that a large number of gulls have chosen the lakes in Yinchuan as their habitats, I am writing to offer some suggestions.

First, I advise we should protect the lakes where the gulls live. Second, it would be a great idea if we don't spray pesticides on the plants around the lakes. Third, we had better raise people's awareness of protecting the birds through TV, newspaper and radio.

As a foreigner, I still feel it my responsibility to call on all people to do something for the gulls. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Mike

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假如你是在寧夏學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)留學(xué)生Mike，最近從《新消息》上得知有大量的紅嘴鷗（gulls )落戶銀川的湖泊，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)報(bào)社寫(xiě)一份信， 內(nèi)容包括：1. 表達(dá)自己的喜悅心情；2.對(duì)保護(hù)紅嘴鷗提出一些建議。

第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：a large number of (許多)；offer some suggestions(提供建議)；spray pesticides(噴灑農(nóng)藥)；raise people's awareness of (提升人們……的意識(shí))等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。