分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖畫(huà)類作文,根據(jù)提示信息針對(duì)五一前夕學(xué)校組織"我愛(ài)我家"的實(shí)踐周活動(dòng)這一話題開(kāi)展討論,大家發(fā)表了不同的看法,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn),分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題.2、要根據(jù)圖畫(huà)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài),就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):
(高分句型一) As the school appealed for our community spirit,we immediately moved into action,discussing what we could do for our community.
該句使用了as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,當(dāng)…時(shí)候;discussing是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)表示伴隨;
(高分句型二)With our investigation going deeper,more and more problems were revealed.
該句使用了被動(dòng)句型,即be revealed;
(高分句型三)What irritated us most was that some bikes were even deliberately damaged.
What irritated us most 是主語(yǔ)從句,意思是最使我們生氣的是;that some bikes…引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句;
高級(jí)詞匯:currently目前地;put our idea into action付諸實(shí)施;to our excitement讓我們興奮地是;
解答 Various activities were organized in our school during the Social Practice Week themed"Love Our Community"before May Day Holiday.
(高分句型一) As the school appealed for our community spirit,we immediately moved into action,discussing what we could do for our community.Ideas like garbage classification,smog control all flashed through our minds.However,we finally decided to investigate the problem with the use of the currently popular shared bikes like Mobike and Ofo.(引出寫(xiě)作話題)
Wasting no time,we immediately put our idea into action.(高分句型二)With our investigation going deeper,more and more problems were revealed.Some bikes were parked disorderly.Some were locked with personal locks.(高分句型三)What irritated us most was that some bikes were even deliberately damaged.We felt urgent action was needed to solve these problems.As a result,we posted the pictures we took on WeChat Moments,starting an initiative for the proper use of the shared bikes.Much to our excitement,people responded positively.Our post was read about 20,000 times,got 10,000 likes and received many encouraging comments.(分析共享單車現(xiàn)狀)
We felt a great sense of achievement,but we also know that the bike-sharing program will not work well until each and every member of our society watches their behavior and acts properly.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是圖畫(huà)類寫(xiě)作,考生在寫(xiě)作前應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察所給圖畫(huà),再運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確的、合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)合實(shí)際將圖片內(nèi)容描述清楚.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中切忌偏離主題,盡量做到圖文搭配.
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