Question

【題目】假定你是劉明，剛剛以優(yōu)異成績從美國某大學畢業(yè)。你的的美國朋友Tony邀請你去他的公司工作，但是你想回國工作。請給Tony寫一封郵件婉拒他的邀請。

內(nèi)容要點包括：

1.報效祖國；

2.照顧父母；

3.發(fā)展空間大。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tony,

Thanks for offering me a job in your company, but I have decided to go back to work in China.

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Yours,

Liu Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony

Thanks for offering me a job in your company ,but I hav decided to go back to work in China. The reasons are as follows.

Firstly ,I’m a Chinese and I love my coutry . I feel it my duty to devote all I have learned in America to my motherland to make it stronger. Secondly my parents are aging, so , as their only sone. I need to be with them and take good care of them. Besides , China is developing very fast, which offers more opportunities for me to build my career. Lastly ,most of my friends and classmates work in China, that is , it is easier for me to live and work in a familiar environment.

I would appreciate it if you can understand my choice. Wish you a splendid future.

Yours

Lihua

【解析】試題分析：考查提綱類作文寫作，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見短語：as follows如下； feel it my duty to感覺做某事是我的責任； take good care of照顧； offer me a job提供給某人某物。I feel it my duty to devote all I have learned in America to my motherland to make it stronger.這個句子中I have learned in America做的是all的定語從句，to make it stronger.做目的狀語。Besides , China is developing very fast, which offers more opportunities for me to build my career.這個句子中which引導的是非限制性定語從句。I would appreciate it if you can understand my choice.這外句子中考查 I would appreciate it if …..如果你做某事我將不勝感激。