Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，最近國內(nèi)一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。

贊成遷出： 1.游客多，交通堵塞; 2.郊區(qū)環(huán)境好

反對遷出： 1.建于1906年，中外聞名; 2.搬遷易造成動物死亡

注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。

2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯： 郊區(qū)—suburb

Dear Editor ,

Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about _______________

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor ,

Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信類作文，需要寫出贊成遷出和反對遷出兩種觀點。贊成遷出： 1.游客多，交通堵塞; 2.郊區(qū)環(huán)境好。反對遷出： 1.建于1906年，中外聞名; 2.搬遷易造成動物死亡。寫作時需要注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照方位順序進行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city用了現(xiàn)在完成時和狀語從句。other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years是同位語從句。用了副詞However，What’s more讓層次更加分明。