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8．李華的筆友Make最近感覺身體不適，因此寫信向李華詢問如何保持身體健康． 假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下要點提示用英文給他回信．要點提示：
1．合理飲食，避免吃脂肪高及含糖多的食物，多吃新鮮蔬菜和水果；
2．鍛煉身體，合理鍛煉有助身體健康；
3．保證充足睡眠，不要熬夜；
4．你的其他建議…
字數(shù)：100詞左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給但不計入總數(shù)，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)）．
Dear Make，
I'm glad to receive your letter，But I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well these days．_______________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely，
                                                                            Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給最近總是感覺身體不適，詢問如何保持身體健康的筆友Jane回封信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：合理飲食，避免吃脂肪高及含糖多的食物，多吃新鮮蔬菜和水果；鍛煉身體，合理鍛煉有助身體健康；保證充足睡眠，不要熬夜；你的其他建議…．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為寫信意圖．第二部分為保持身體健康的建議．
重點短語與句型：stay healthy保持健康；keep a balanced diet均衡飲食；avoid doing 避免做某事；stay up too late at night熬夜
高分句型一：Why not take more exercise in your spare time？此句用了why not+動詞原形，征求對方意見
高分句型二：Only by eating properly and exercising regularly can you keep your body at a proper weight and stay healthy此句only+介詞短語，主句部分倒裝

解答 Dear Jane，
    I'm  glad  to  receive your letter． But at the same time，I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well these days．In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy．Here is my advice．（寫信意圖）
   Firstly，you should keep a balanced diet．You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food．You'd better eat more fresh vegetables and fruits．Secondly，taking exercise every day helps build （up） a strong body．Why not take more exercise in your spare time？（高分句型一）As we all know，regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy．Finally，make sure you have enough sleep and you mustn't stay up too late at night．Only by eating properly and exercising regularly can you keep your body at a proper weight and stay healthy（高分句型二）．I truly hope my advice is helpful and you'll get well soon．（保持身體健康的建議）
    Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．