【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail. I am very exciting at the good news that you have admitted into Harvard. First I’d like to offer my congratulation to you on your great success.

Since you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination. Day after day I work very hard but have to stay up later doing piles of papers. Therefore, I’m always feeling stressed out because of my efforts seem to be fruitless, which had made me upset and tired. Will you be kind enough to give some advice on how to do?

I would appreciate that if you could write back to me as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

【解析】第一處:人感到興奮應(yīng)該用excited,exciting是指物令人興奮。

第二處:admit與主語之間是被動關(guān)系,是“被錄取”,故應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài),加上been。

第三處:congratulation“祝賀”,常用復(fù)數(shù)。

第四處:as you know“正如你所知道的”,是固定短語。

第五處:句意:一天又一天我努力學(xué)習(xí)并熬夜到很晚做成堆的卷子。前后兩個動作是并列關(guān)系,而不是轉(zhuǎn)折,所以將but改為and。

第六處:later表示“后來的”;late是副詞,表示“晚地,時間不早地”。這里指晚上熬夜到很晚,所以改為late。

第七處:because of是介詞短語,后面后面跟名詞或動名詞等;而because是連接,后面跟句子。這里后面是句子,所以把of去掉。

第八處:這篇文章講述的是現(xiàn)在的事情,這里表示現(xiàn)在我很沮喪很累,所以要用現(xiàn)在完成時,把had改為has。

第九處:on后面跟的是賓語從句,從句中又缺少賓語,所以應(yīng)該用what。how在從句中擔(dān)當(dāng)狀語。

第十處:I would appreciate it if...這是一個固定句型,意為“如果……我將不勝感激。”在這個句型中,it是形式賓語,真正的賓語是if引導(dǎo)的從句。

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