Question

12．請(qǐng)改正下面短文中的錯(cuò)誤．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞；
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉；
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Last Saturday，my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train．There was a large number of people in the crowded train，but everyone help those who had lots of baggage and behaved politely．Along the way，we enjoyed beautifully views．At first，we saw one hill after another．Then what came into our eye were fields with green crops．In a six-hour trip，we arrived at my grandparents'house．Exhausted though I felt，but I was happy to see my grandparents，which I hadn't seen for a long time．It's really an excited trip because it was the first time I had taken so a long-distance train．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：上周六，我和父母乘火車去看望爺爺．車上，很有禮貌，很擁擠，但是每個(gè)人都會(huì)幫助那些行李特別多的人．一路下來我很疲勞，但是看到爺爺我感到很開心．

解答 Last Saturday，my parents and I paid∧visit to my grandparents by train．There wasa
                                                       a                                                           were
large number of people in the crowded train，but everyone help those who had lots of
                                                                                     helped
baggage and behaved politely．Along the way，we enjoyed beautifullyviews．At first，we saw
                                                                                    beautiful
one hill after another．Then what came into our eyewere fields with green crops．In a six-hour
                                                                     eyes                                       After
trip，we arrived at my grandparents'house．Exhausted though I felt，butI was happy to see my
                                                                                                  去掉but
grandparents，which I hadn't seen for a long time．It's really an excited trip because it was the
                      whom                                                                exciting
first time I had taken soa long-distance train．
                                such
1．在paid后加a．考查冠詞． pay a visit to是固定搭配，意為"參觀，拜訪"．
2．was→were．考查主謂一致．There be句型中，be動(dòng)詞的人稱和數(shù)與be后的主語保持一致，此處主語是a large number of people，謂語用復(fù)數(shù)．
3．baggages→baggage．考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．baggage 是不可數(shù)名詞，故用baggage．
4．beautifully→beautiful．考查形容詞形式．此處屬于形容詞和副詞的誤用，應(yīng)用形容詞修飾名詞，故用beautiful．
5．which→whom．考查定語從句．此處應(yīng)用whom引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾前面的grandparents．
6．In→After．考查介詞搭配．此處表示六個(gè)小時(shí)的旅程后，故用After．
7．去掉but．考查連詞．though 不與but連用，故去掉but．
8．haven't→hadn't．考查時(shí)態(tài)．從句的動(dòng)作顯然發(fā)生在主句動(dòng)作之前，主句用了一般過去時(shí)，從句需要用過去完成時(shí)．
9．excited→exciting．考查形容詞形式．此處修飾trip，故用exciting，表示"令人興奮的"．
10．so→such．考查副詞．so修飾形容詞或副詞，such修飾名詞，故此處用such．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇短文改錯(cuò)考查冠詞，動(dòng)詞形式，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，時(shí)態(tài)等，平時(shí)注重多積累，答題時(shí)結(jié)合句意和語法進(jìn)行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯．