Question

7．下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤．請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分． 例如：
Last Saturday I went to the Great Wall with some of my friends．In our way up，we saw many volunteers working in the sun．They helped the elders with their bags，took photos for some tourist and answered people's questions．Because they were very tired，they didn't stop to have a rest．
Just at the moment，we saw a little boy standing alone，cried．We went over and asked wh at is the matter．From his answer we knew he couldn't find his mother．We told him not to worry and then we tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he gave us．Twenty minutes late，his mother turned up．When she saw her son，she got relieved but thanked us again and again．
That day we not only enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall，but felt the warm of the society．If everyone can reach a helping hand to others，the world will be more harmonious．

Answer 1

分析 文章講述了作者和朋友去長(zhǎng)城玩，路上遇到一個(gè)小朋友和自己的媽媽走散了．在作者和朋友的一起努力下，幫助小朋友找了媽媽．如果每個(gè)人都能在別人困難時(shí)伸出援助之手，那么我們的世界將更加和諧．

解答 Last Saturday I went to the Great Wall with some of my friends．In our way up，we saw many
                                                                                              On
volunteers working in the sun．They helped the elders with their bags，took photos for some tourist 
                                                                                                                                        tourists
and answered people's questions．Because they were very tired，they didn't stop to have a rest．
                                             Although/Though/While
Just at the moment，we saw a little boy standing alone，cried．We went over and asked what is the
                                                                                   crying                                            was
matter．From his answer we knew he couldn't find his mother．We told him not to worry and then

we tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he gave us．Twenty minutes
                        去掉
late，his mother turned up．When she saw her son，she got relieved but thanked us again and again．
Later                                                                                             and
That day we not only enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall，but felt the warm of the society．If
                                                                                                         warmth
everyone can reach∧a helping hand to others，the world will be more harmonious．
                          加out
1．In改為On．短語(yǔ)搭配，on one's way to去某地的路上．
2．tourist改為tourists．題干中前面有some修飾，tourist是可數(shù)名詞，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
3．Because改為Although/Though/While．句意表示的是讓步關(guān)系，盡管他們很累，但仍然沒(méi)有休息．
4．cried改為crying．題干中，前面是一個(gè)完整的句子，沒(méi)有連詞，cry要用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，cry與the little boy是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞．
5．is改為was．文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
6．the去掉．短語(yǔ)搭配，get in touch with sb和某人取得聯(lián)系．
7．late改為later．late遲到的，later多久后，常和時(shí)間段連用．
8．but改為and．句意表達(dá)的是承接關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
9．warm改為warmth．題干中warm是用來(lái)作felt的賓語(yǔ)，而且前面有the，后面有介詞of，說(shuō)明要用名詞．
10．加out．短語(yǔ)搭配，reach out伸出．reach表示的是到達(dá)的意思．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)篇理解和語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力．常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)）；動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配）；代詞（不定代詞，人稱代詞）；形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)化）；連詞（and，but，or）；冠詞（an，a，the）等．解題時(shí)，要把握好句子結(jié)構(gòu)，以動(dòng)詞為中心．動(dòng)詞和與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤在短文改錯(cuò)中占很大的比例．